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darkness enveloping
slowly grasping slowly sufficating
my slim slender form
my light is bright o so bright
it illuminates my pale ghastly body
OOO HOW IT BURNS
slowly it is burning me alive
i will keep it bright o so bright
darkness is worse than my fate
i will burn bright as a beacon to others
till i myself melt away
and darkness conquers all.
A Note: This was not written by me, but rather by a friend who would like the feedback of all you dear folks here on Fictionpress. Not only that, but he wrote iton his cell phone, sending it to me line by line.: That being said, this poem is also a riddle-- any guesses as to what it is can go in the review-- as we all know you'll review... riiiiiight?