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Disclaimer: Obviously, I do not own Hollister, CA
Disclaimer: Obviously, I do not own Hollister, CA. I did write everything from my imagination.
Second Draft.
Coin Laundry
Police Report:
Suspect was seen breaking and entering the location, Tumble and Dry, at 2am. A near by witness described the scene as out of the ordinary and amusing.
Witness said, “She was trying to break the window with a plastic lawn chair. It didn’t take her long to figure how that would work for her.” Suspect resisted arrest and was chased down road. Though suspect proceeded to run, she quickly fell into a trash can.
Suspect was taken in at 2:30am and fingerprinted at 9am the following day.
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Witness(s) Information
Name: Bradley Warren
Age: 22
Sex: M
Location: Hollister, California
Contact Number: 555-555-5342
Description: Blond/ Brown Hair, 6"1, Green Eyes
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Suspect Information
Name: Paisley Simon
Age: 18
Sex: F
Location: Hollister, California
Contact Number: 555-555-5775
Description: Mid Length Brown Hair, 5"7, Blue Eyes
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Suspects comments:
Ok, to understand all that happened you have to see things from my point of view. I did not break into Margie’s I swear! You cannot trust the police these days. No offense to you guys, but sure you say you’re working to protect and serve, but this situation is ridiculous. You’re the ones asking for a confession and putting me in the slammer. I do confess however that I’m going to kick that guy’s ass. I was not breaking in.. Okay, I was, but.. never mind.
This report was submitted by: Officer Poncho Amsterdam
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ID: 02934-34645
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A/N:
So here I am, trying again. I tweaked little things, nothing really significant. Looking back, I was really weak with my writing. Hopefully, I will be able to deliver a better story!
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