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Chapter 1- Flowing Red hair
Well I hope this gets me more reviews. I have had ABSOLUTLEY NONE on the prologue and I hope that no one was angry that I’ve only posted a prologue. I wanted to give a teaser but I don’t think that anyone liked it. I hope that more people will like the story. I have given it to all my friends at school to read and I told them to be brutally honest and they’ve all told me they like it. So I hope you all like it. Thanks. ENJOY!!
He took the ends of her flowing hip length red hair and twisted it in his hands. He looked up into her hazel golden eyes.
He pulled her close and whispered into her ear.
“My Darling, I know you love me, but I’m giving you the opportunity to leave now, and not have to forever be running from our fathers’ pasts.”
He looked at her face. In the moonlight it was as white as snow, her hair looked as dark as red embers from a fire.
“I know” she whispered back. “But I want to be with you. Without you I would surely suffer more than you could ever imagine.”
She smiled at him.
“William?” she said.
“Yes, dear Emily?” he said.
“My mother has become suspicious of me.” she said rather worried.
“I fear we may have to stop meeting in our hidden clearing.” She said.
Her eyes looked almost glazed.
“Darling I believe that we must first know what is going on before we can stop meeting. If we did and it was all for nothing I would bleed myself to death because of my not seeing you.” William said.
He looked at Emily with a great smile.
“You are so dramatic, William. What am I to do with you?” Emily said as she put her lengthy, slender arms around his neck.
He was only a bit taller than her but she still had to stand on the tips of her toes to reach him. She looked at his dark brownish blonde hair and ran one of her hands through it. She looked into his crystal, ocean blue eyes and said
“I Love You.”
He took her hand and walked her as close to the edge of the forest as the moonlight would permit him
“Tomorrow then, right?” she asked longingly.
He looked at her and smiled.
“Yes, tomorrow.” He said.
And then he watched her turn and leave.