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A/N: I was thinking about the heavy stuff a lot of my friends are going through, and I wrote this, because I really want to help them but I can't really. I don’t usually do poetry, and I do free-form (or that word for non-rhyming poetry that I forgot because I’m stupid) stuff like this even less, so this is a new thing for me. Be completely brutal, I didn’t edit this so I want reviews that tell me what I did wrong and what to fix. Point out the tiniest error, please.
Let Me Help You
I see what you’re
going through,
I see it, but I don’t
know
I want to help.
I want to help
but I don’t know how,
and it hurts.
You say I don’t know
a thing about it,
you’re right
you say that I don’t
understand,
you’re right.
I want to.
I see you suffering
it tears me in half.
My heart aches, my eyes
burn
because of what you
feel
and because I can’t
help.
I can only imagine,
only guess at your
anguish,
haven’t been there,
can’t say I
understand.
But I want to.
You say I don’t
understand,
I want to.
Make me understand.
Pour out your soul to
me,
tell me what you feel,
so I can feel it too,
so I can know
just some fleeting
shadow
of your pain.
I want to know what
it’s like,
I want to be there
beside you,
suffer with you,
ache with you,
and take your pain into
me.
I don’t care how much
it hurts,
as long as I can say I
helped.
Make me understand.
Let me help you.