
A poem about me feeling hyper and lucky...i absolutely LOVED this one, probably cuz I havent been writing many cheerful things lately. Review plz? I promise you'll like it.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 187 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 03-10-06 - id: 2129446
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Lucky Day II
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I used to have a poem already called 'lucky day' which is why this is number two, in case any one of u are wondering. I remember Shazaam Red Onattopp loved it, maybe he'll like this one too......HINT! Jeez, Shazaam, review already if you're still around...And to the rest of you, I LOVED this poem, hopefully you'll like it too. Whatcha thinking?
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I throw open my windows,
And I know straight away,
The Sun is shining, birds are singing,
And it's my lucky day.
A feeling bubbling in me,
Getting ready to explode,
Grab my clothes and car keys,
Off to explore the roads.
The coolest breeze flowing,
The gentlest rain falling,
A twinkle in my eyes,
For once, time is stalling.
Burdens disappear,
And I am clean and free,
If only for a moment,
I can be just me.
Zooming through the streets,
A silent echoe in my brain,
Sleepy skin glowing,
And there is no pain.
Just a feeling of serenity,
Leading me on my way,
Relaxed, I start to sing,
This is my lucky day...
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