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a journey from changing a regular poem into a haiku, a 7-5-7 and a 5-7-5 (because people couldn't tell me which). please r/r!
Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 03-14-06 - id: 2132122
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1. regular poem
title: Dawn of the Evening
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence
before the dawn.
2. 7-5-7 haiku version
silver moons close away, leaving
a husky silence
before the dawn of the evening.
3. 5-7-5 haiku
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence.
before the dawn evening.
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