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When The Tip Fades
By
Rob Blake
Fade in. You see a man in a business suit wearing a fedora walk into his office. It is a fairly regular office, nothing special. He walks through the room and you start to notice something strange… everything in it is messed up. He picks up a typewriter off the ground. He picks up several pieces of paper scattered around the room. He sits down, he is un comfortable. Gets back up and moves to the door and stands his coat rack where it used to be. He takes off his jacket and fedora and put it on the coat rack. He sits back down and pulls out a cigarette form his shirt pocket. Sticks it in his mouth and lights it, the smoke starting to fill the room. He starts to type. This man is John Rancon.
RANCON(over him typing):
Day: October 18, 1941
Time: 8
File: The Hammet Account
Number of people dead: 5 that I know of.
Account: It began at 6 o’clock this evening. It had been day full of nothin’. Nothin’ but layin’ around and typin’ up reports.
Cut to earlier. He is still in his office typing but now everything is clean and tidy. He gets up to leave and puts on his jacket and fedora. He takes a cigarette out of his pocket and lights it. His phone rings. He goes to pick it up. His secretary is on the phone. He sounds as beautiful as she truly is, and that is a lot mind you.
SECRETARY
Mr. Rancon?
RANCON
Yea?
SECRETARY
You don’t have any plans tonight to do ya?
RANCON
Not yet. You want to do something?
SECRETARY
No, I have a man on the phone who wants to drop in later. He says that he has a job for you.
RANCON
Ask him if he can pay.
SECRETARY
Okay one minute.
RANCON (talking to himself)
Hopefully this guy will have something interesting.
SECRETARY
Mr. Rancon, I’m back.
RANCON
Shoot.
SECRETARY
He says he can pay as much as you want.
RANCON
What is the bastard’s name?
SECRETARY
He says it is Orson Bogart.
RANCON
Well then tell Mr. Bogart I will be waitin’ for him here.
SECRETARY
Hey, boss. Can I get my pay check a little early?
RANCON
The only thing I’ve had in two weeks is that damn jewel store robbery.
SECRETARY
I know, but I really need it…
RANCON
You know what? I would love to get it to you in advance, but the truth of it all is that I just don’t got it. I need the money too, okay? But I’m livin’ in my office and just eating scraps and food that would not be fitting for even a rat to eat. You got it better than I got it okay? I take the money that people can give me. Usually it ain’t a hell of a lot. Listen this ain’t the pictures, we don’t have people bein’ killed right and left, and that is a good thing, but it doesn’t pay well.
SECRETARY
But…
RANCON
Just be quiet. I will try. Will that make you happy?
SECRETARY
Yea.
Rancon puts down the phone, but doesn’t hang it up. He walks out of his office and to his secretary’s room. He walks up behind her. Puts his arms around her and looks at her face.
RANCON
Can I get a smile?
SECRETARY
Of course.
She takes out the cigarette. They kiss. She puts it back into his mouth.
RANCON
Nice smile. What is so important?
SECRETARY
Well I’m going to my parents when I get off, and I want to buy them something. My dad isn’t doing to well.
RANCON
Well, then you can leave. I can manage it around here by myself.
SECRETARY
You sure?
RANCON
Yea, now get outta here.
SECRETARY
Okay, I just need to finish up a few things.
RANCON
Then I will get out of your hair.
Rancon leaves. His secretary watches him leave. When he does, she writes a note and puts is about to put it on his door, but suddenly a man walks up behind her. He is heavier set and wearing an overcoat and hat and suit. He startles her. He is the chief of police Bruce Davidtz.
BRUCE
Sorry about that Mary, didn’t know I would startle you.
MARY(aka the Secretary)
Oh it is okay Bruce.
BRUCE
Is John here?
MARY
Yea, Mr. Rancon is inside. What is going on?
BRUCE
I need to talk to John right now.
MARY
Yes sir. What is so important?
BRUCE
I can’t really talk to you about it before I talk to John.
MARY
Okay, I’ll tell him you’re here.
BRUCE
Sure.
Mary opens the door and peers in.
MARY
Mr. Rancon. Chief Davidtz is here.
RANCON
Sure let ol’ Bruce come on in.
Bruce walks in. Rancon gets up. They shake hands.
RANCON
Hey Bruce, how goes it?
BRUCE
I’m doing pretty good, but I know one fella who ain’t.
RANCON
Is that so? Sit down.
BRUCE
Yea, it is.
They both do so.
BRUCE
Yea, we got a call about 10 minutes ago that some poor stiff is lying dead in a ditch just outside of town.
RANCON
I’m betting that wasn’t no tractor accident.
BRUCE
Nope, the poor sap was shot three times.
RANCON
So you want my help?
BRUCE
Well that is what I came here for.
RANCON
I’ll be glad to do it. Nothin’ interesting ever comes my way, and I’m the only detective in the whole damn county.
BRUCE
Well this is the first murder in three years.
RANCON
And my business ain’t for the better.
BRUCE
Would you rather that people die?
RANCON
Hey, if it is better for business. In all reality though, what do we know?
BRUCE
He is dead. That is it. Like I said we got the call 10 minutes ago. I came by right after we heard. I sent a squad out after them.
RANCON
So I have nothing to go off of do I?
BRUCE
Nope, but you probably will when you get there.
RANCON
Well, why did you come here without any leads?
BRUCE
I was on my way over to the scene, and thought you would like to check it out.
RANCON
Okay, let’s get going instead of just sitting here.
They both get up and walk out of the room. They walk by his secretary.
RANCON
Hey doll. Can
you leave a note to tell Mr. Bogart to come in when he gets here. I
will be back in an hour, two hours tops.
MARY
Sure.
Rancon and Davidtz walk out. Mary is left alone now. She pulls something out of her desk. You can’t really tell what it is. She heads to Rancon’s office. Opens the door and walks in. She leaves a small sliver of light. It gives just enough illumination to tell she is pulling up some carpet in the corner. There is a whole, inside she puts the object. He walks over to the desk and types up a short note and puts that in the whole also. She then leaves the note that she was going to leave for Rancon on his desk and leaves. You see her pick up her coat and walk out into the rain.
Cut back to the place where she put it. It was on the edge of the carpet, and she accidently got a little corner of it in there. A very slow zoom in, so slow you can barely notice it.