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Comments: I hate it, I love it, it's sporadic, confusing, and I think it has to do something with the seven deadly sins. I could be wrong. Ah yes, I should mention now that I know mellifluousity isn't a word. So please don't tell me that if you write a review, let's just say I was taking a few artistic liberties.
Godchild
Pretty baby, she sings fondling puckered flesh
While I watch her from this diaphanous haze
And you should know they call it fluidity
I’ll just gulp for breath,
—compound of saliva and something ominous—
Then live with patience, as her voice forms rust around my ankles.
--
You ask (for fools never live more than once) what brought us here
So she prepares, bowing before you piercing blanched mouth,
By burbling open wide,
Vomiting silk; it feels like the heavens
It tastes like envy
—and I plan to sing the harmony, pretty, pretty baby—
--
She wants to begin when the Cerberus opened the gate
Yet I scold her (that’s one more tear down my cheek) and say,
That once upon a time the Spider-man and Mad Hatter
Asked us to dine
—we’re seated upon pointed breath and silvery silence—
Sharpening teeth and crooning oh pretty baby.
--
Never was there such a warmth, she gasps
You watch as I cross then dissolve
The wonders of mellifluousity running down my throat
And into her belly
Pretty, oh pretty baby, they resonate then consume our remainders
—the Cheshire beaming brilliance as he greets us with a cackle—
--
Across the bridge built of failure (bones and dilapidated hairs)
Vertigo takes over me, when she looks down
But I never lose count of the steps, whisper them with honour
He does nothing but smirk
And I follow suit as she kisses the third Witch in all her predictable glory
—Pretty baby, then enfolds her in my decadence—
--
Blistered and worn, and now I need
Still, she is playing domestics with Hades
Pretty baby, loving wife, strung up in the master’s bed
Her name is Persephone
—please allow my entrance, I beg but it tells me it’s an eye for an eye—
Pretty baby, he growls for you and no other, you are more than crystalline.
--
What pummels through arteries remains a picture of a menacing grin and lust
And she murmurs, then sends her demons to crawl underneath broken skin
So I am discarded.
Simply tearing at the one vision I have left
And she kisses her lips into plumpness
—pretty baby, I want to see your placidity when you drown—
--
And I push hard against liquid, she’ll never tumble
But the jingling rust around her legs tells me:
It is finished.
Oh pretty baby, she groans, will you sing for me?