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Skin Shallow
Lost in the sea of faces
Appraised by beauty’s hierarchy
This eye that can see things in opaque
Blurred it can see more lucid
Sight that sees only skin shallow
Intents always and only to deceive
Deluded by your splendor
I didn’t see the filth, within your skin
Sight has blinded me
From the ugliness of the beauty you posses
I guess I’ve looked at you too much
That I didn’t see you
Judge me after a look
And it’s pointless for me to present myself
I loved you for just a smile
And hated me for everything else
The poem was not very clear, as I wanted it to be… I guess I was a little distracted while writing the poem. But anyway, I hope to read your reviews. Your comments, suggestions and criticisms are very much welcomed.