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Blow Out
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I began this one in Starbucks before coming home and finishing it. Not the most graceful but it's meant to be sung.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Tragedy - Words: 144 - Published: 03-28-06 - id: 2142138
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If it were to end now
Would you be satisfied
I know I couldn't go out this way

I can't be free
And still be torn
I can't move on
Until you've gone

If it were to end this way
Would you be alright with me
I know I wouldn't feel the same

I can't be free
And still be torn
I can't move on
Until you've gone

If I were to blow out
Where the hell would you be
I know I couldn't count on you

If I were to blow out
I don't think I'd ever come back
I know I couldn't give my love to you

I can't be free
And still be torn
I can't move on
While you're still around

#541 - 3.28.06

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