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Author: paper ink flowers
Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Reviews: 2 - Published: 04-15-06 - Updated: 04-15-06 - id:2154156

Note:I do not own Jet, or any of their songs. I was just listening to this and the story hit me so... and for any Jet fans out there, I apologize if you dont like it.


She sits quietly on the hardwood floor, and watches the rain drip down the remaining glass of the broken window. The liquid crystal falls onto the hardwood floor, brigning with it pigments of crimson that dye the edges of the glass. The rain water forms a puddle across the floor, and melts with the ocean of red that lies there as well

Oh, look what you’ve done…

A single tear runs down her cheek, and into her stained hands. They make fists, and her hands start shaking from her sobs.

You’ve made a fool out of everyone…

She stands, her ripped white dress flowing behind her. She moves slowly from the lake of red liquid in which she was sitting, leaving large red stains on the seams of her dress. As she walks, her tears fall into the liquid below, a drop of crystal within a ocean of crimson.

Oh well, it seems like such fun…

She stands before the window. The broken glass pane lets the wind flow through into the dark room, lets it flow through her hair, her dress, lets it caress her pale skin. A sad smile forms on her lips, and she closes her eyes, imagining herself away from this place. When her eyes open again, she is staring down at a figure laying on the floor, surrounded by crimson. She opens her stained hand, and from it takes a heart shaped locket. She ties it around the figures neck, and opens it. Inside are two pictures, a handsome man and a beautiful girl. Another of her tears falls in between the two pictures.

Until you lose what you had won…

She sits beside the hidden figure sadly, then her eyes catch a flash of silver on his chest. She carefully picks up the crimson-stained blade, and runs her fingers along its side, before setting it down back where it was. A sad smile passes over her lips, and she stands and faces the window.

Oh, look what you’ve done You’ve made a fool of everyone

Fool of everyone…

Of everyone…



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