
First poem i've ever written, i'm not too sure about it, what do you think? Please R&R! About the feelings you have when in love...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 366 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 04-19-06 - id: 2156970
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when you're in love
when you're in love
when you're in love, you know you are - signs tell and angels whisper
you walk slow alongside slow songs
your heart stops and speeds up, together
you only see that one person, no matter where you both are...
crowds, alone, dreams
smile smile smile, all the time
butterflies, spreading joy
all you ever think about
smile, face, laugh, eyes, voice, smell
trusting them beyond belief, knowing them more so than anyone else, keeping their secrets and sharing yours
happy with life now
happy feelings, whispering its right
and you know it is, know its for real, know its for you
and you're happy for once, feeling comfortable with them, falling in their arms - being caught before hitting the floor
and all of a sudden you don't care anymore because the feeling is enough to ensure you're happy for life, knowing that they are there for you, no matter who you are, where you go and whatever you may do.
Never letting go
when you're in love
- love -
when you're in love
all words fail you, as also movement does, standing still, watching poor, empty excuses ensnare you, circling, swooping, swallowing you whole, cruel and hurtful excuses rolling off tongues
and you know, know its over and know its done, know they've left you feeling less than whole
smothering you
choking all of you slowly and painfully
killing you
killing your heart
all you can think about
pain, death, betrayal, hurt, cry, them
the daggers sounding in their voice as they slowly say they're sorry, avoiding your eyes, speeding up, shutting down
killing butterflies
pain - surrounding and encircling you
your world stops and crashes
your heart breaks
and as your tears fall, like they never have before, your mind begins to swim as your soul slowly drowns
and all of a sudden you don't care anymore because all good in your life has gone, all hope faded and left, nothing there anymore but a broken and empty you, left to wallow in the misery of them.
It's hard to let go
when you're in love
- love -
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