grins I like critiscism. Just don't be toooooooooooooooo harsh, pretty please, but don't get me wrong, I love critiscism. Now, one thing I'd like to explain, this wasn't actually supposed to be a poem or anything, it just LOOKS like one.There's a lot of shortcut lingo like "tht" "ur" please don't mind it. I wrote it quite fast, when I did write it. D So yah, critiscism is welcome.

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. i didn’t.

i feel like curling up and forgetting everything. not do anything
but i can’t do tht
cuz i don’t wanna wallow in self pity
i’m not like that.
i’m not.
i wish,
i wish i had something
something to drive me on
make me motvitated
give me tht motivation
that would truly keep me going, push me,
to what i want
to what i could acheive
'bitter chortle' i wish i could say that one day i’d make it happen
and you know what
maybe i will
but right now
i think that’s tough
tough luck for me, for this gal
i’m hoping this will make me motivated
i guess thats why i write
but i don’t know
cuz i think deep down
i know even this isn’t enough to drive me on
and acheive what i want, and get that desire fulfilled.
i don’t have tht
but oh, i wish i did,
i wish so much.
i don’t even wanna write anymore
i just don’t wanna

i hate that.