Okay, I have decided to do a re-vamp of this whole story, as well as continuing it, because I think it wasn't very good. My writing style and methods and writing as a whole as improved, so I decided to share it with you.

This re-vamp will include:-

- Longer Chapter
- More action, i.e. more things will be going on in each chapter
- More background info on each character
- Better characterization (at least as good as I can give)
- Making everything better.

There will much change in chapters, like I said total re-vamp. This revising will be better than the original idea. Hope you like it.

None of the chapters have been re-vamped as of yet, so I suggest you do not go one reading. I am currently working on chapter one and I will alert you (or at least put it on this Announcement chapter) once it is done. Every chapter that I re-vamp will have the word "Re-Vamp" at the beginning of the chapter in big blod letters so that you'll know.

Re-Vamped Chapters

Chapter One

Silent Retribution.