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Author: Depraved613
Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Reviews: 12 - Published: 05-15-06 - Updated: 03-25-08 - id:2174441

Chapter Eight: Before Once Upon a Time

A/N:

I would really like to ask for forgiveness for the rude hiatus. I have a lot of things going on at home, but the new chapter will be finished within the next few days, and posted. I’m not sure of the ending of the story, which will determine how many chapters are left. I also still need a beta. Maybe then I could bounce some ideas off of them. If you know someone, please inform them.

Thanks.

... Monster POV

Once upon a time, there was no King. The Man was an Adolescent, but the Monster still existed. He was a socialite child from a family cursed.

All of the men, and most of the women, were beautiful people, haunted with their own monsters. Each of them seemed to have too much in different parts. Too much lust, too much anger; too much sex drive. Too much heart.

And the man, soon to be known as the King, suffered all of them. The house he grew up in was torn apart because of that. It didn’t matter that he had everything he could want. Even his sibling had the same problem.

He knew from a young age that he never wanted children. He would never want them to suffer with the torment. He believed that he was saving them from this sadness. He also knew that his Monster could take complete control.

The only reason he wasn’t in prison was because of his money.

When he met his future Queen, the pretty, slightly punk, but extremely shy personality caught his attention. And she handled him in the bedroom. He didn’t think that she would after their first time, but he convinced her.

And she ended up being the best thing. He was most overjoyed because of her preexisting son. He felt that she might not have wanted another child.

He became the proud owner of a perfectly formed family. He could reign his Monster in, to just the days he didn’t see her; to prostitutes he’d visit every few months. To the submissives that seemed drawn to him.

That was, until, he met her young son. He had beautiful eyes; and was more passive than her. He reminded the Monster of a fairytale princess; too perfect to have no monsters.

So he became the monster.

He scared the boy out of his wits with fear, and it helped him stay away from his wife. No one could handle the Monster’s full force.

Except the Boy.

And he handled it seemingly well.

Queen POV

Once upon a time, the Queen was Princess. A princess with a son. Her family curse was known as the “Pregnant 16”. Her mother’s side always had their firstborn between late15 and early 16. But, for the most recent few generations, it was within 

the 16th year.

The Princess thought that it would skip over her. She always stayed in school, never keep a boy around. But then she had sex. 15 years old. She told her mother, and she planned for the birth. It also hit her younger sisters and brothers.

Luckily, her mother took care of them (she was dating, and soon married to a rich man), and let her go to school. She couldn’t become a doctor, but her RN was in reach. She started college, and moved into an old family house.

It served its purpose for her and her boy. He was the child that she always hoped she would get. Energetic, smart, funny, and he understood that she had to support them. He was the best child she could picture.

And he was happy that she had started dating. Her future King had his problems, but he really tried to calm himself. She had fallen head over heels for the man; and her little Prince was absolutely supportive.

And even at the wedding, he seemed to like it. But when her King moved in, he because a shrinking violet. He still loved her, so much in fact, but something about her King had turned him off.

She was staring at her three carat ring when she heard a code in the ER. Once of her friends from work said that it was her son and husband.

Her entire face dropped. He heart pounded and she was lightheaded. When she got there she saw her baby lying on a stretcher, and her husband wet and covered in blood.

She screamed when he walked towards her.

“What, what, what happened?” She cried out, frantic for explanation, for anything, “What’s happening with my baby?”

... To Be Continued

A/N:

The next chapeter will be up in a few days. It’s kind of long. Thanks again,

DG


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