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metamorphosis
helium lost
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crack, crack
the cocoon is shattering,
veins
splintering up
along its once-smooth surface,
and from it
emerges—
two antennae,
grappling
searching for a
stronghold
pincers
clicking, dripping
searching for
that delectable, delicious
flesh.
bristled, rough
legs
groping,
trying to find an exit
from this crystalline,
milky-white
(like the clouded eyes of the blind)
hellhole.
such an absurd, disgusting
creature cannot
be the
beautiful
butterfly
i once knew.
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Author’s Notes: Constructive criticism and other reviews are greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Edit: I've decided to remove the first two and a half lines of the second stanza; they just didn't fit.