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Feelings That Most Don't See, revised version
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Travis C. Eckert PM
This is the revised version. The title seemed like it could use an alternate version, may change name to original if I can get a new name for it.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Poetry - Words: 261 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 05-17-06 - id: 2175650
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Feelings that most don't see

I come home to this

All really mad

It seems

I can't handle

Anything

With this rage inside

Really gets me mad

But when I see you

I fall to nothing

Can't you see

Its not right

To not even try

Over and over again

I have sleepless nights

Countless Fights

And several goodbyes

I go to the street

Only on my feet

All alone

People look at me

On the show stage

They don't see the true me

I hide many things

And these are the feelings that most don't see

I whine, punch, roar, kick

I cannot seem to get this to stop

Now most would say this sounds crazy

But its really not

I may be rich, famous, but without you

I have feelings that most don't see

I go to the street

Only on my feet

All alone

People look at me

On the show stage

They don't see the true me

I hide many things

And these are the feelings that most don't see

Now I can go on and on

Complaint after complaint

But I don't because I feel

Unlike them others

Most don't see

That I really care

I open my heart

But they don't seem to care

I go to the street

Only on my feet

All alone

People look at me

On the show stage

They don't see the true me

I hide many things

And these are the feelings that most don't see

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