|Tea With Onions
Author: TeaWithOnions PM
“So I suppose Mai, this is the part where we ride off into the sunset on our gallant llama?” I laughed.Mai smiled and tucked a strand of green hair behind her ear, “As long as we’re back for dessert. I think we’re having peach cobbler.” COMPLETE!Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 36,494 - Reviews: 112 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 09-29-06 - Published: 05-19-06 - Status: Complete - id: 2176851
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"We live life in Bohemia
always questioning and expressing
and drowning ourselves
with the promise of something else more sweet.
To you Bohemia
for giving life to the unthinkable
and never underestimating the impossible.
Because for us,
we will always have our share of
poisonous M&Ms and
Thank you Bohemia
for you taught us how to
catch stars with our bare hands
and to not cry over spilt tea.
Life is irony
but somehow every day
seems a bit more bearable
when you have a friend
with paint stained fingers."
I still have a few favors to ask though. Besides reviewing
these few chapters I would also like to know if you want a sequel? No
promises, but I was just curious. Also this version is just the rought
copy and any last minute comments and helpful hints would be
appreciated so I can use them for my final draft. Espcially with the last chapter. I feel like its too cliche/ corny but I really wanted there to be a happy ending. I know I'm definatley going to involve Jake, and Emma more and develop their characters a bit more. But if you were confused, didn't like something, or wanted more of something please tell me!
Thank you all so very much!