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Counting Water to Think Clearly
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A "perfect" sonnet, but I think it could be better. Work for English class.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Angst - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 05-31-06 - id: 2183310
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One! The icy water hits my legs as I try
Just try to remember if I love you
Who are you? I want to recall. And why?
Maybe it's the obligation; I'm blue.
I mean, the holding hands, snoggings to be
Sure is hard to stay on top with that bliss.
Nobody to make daisy chains with me
The hardcore cute boy is the one I miss
Someone to watch Fight Club, to belong with
And the cold water comes back, I'm alone
Again, and Cinderella is just myth.
Knowledge—who you are, I may never own.
But have I made life's priority to
find love when I more need wisdom for blues.

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