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Author: Dying Rose
Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Reviews: 3 - Published: 06-20-06 - Updated: 06-20-06 - id:2196619

Heart of an eagle

You are my (only) greatest weakness

You hold me; I’m captive, and vulnerable

/To pick up the pieces/ on my own

So take (I give you) my heart and soul,

Un(restrain)ed, “Please” love (me)

Fly me high and let me fall,

(With) only one (you), onelife to live

Heal me (break me), and with this, show me

What it is, “to soar” in this

Gathering storm (beauty?)

Of y(our) love.


Author's Note:I have not, as of yet, titled this poem. It is very different from anything I've ever written before and has many hidden messages and nuances. I dare you to find them all! Please tell me what you think, and if you have title suggestions, I'm open. This is dedicated to the most incredible person I know, and if you read this - I love you!



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