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Author: Neverending
Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Reviews: 4 - Published: 06-21-06 - Updated: 06-21-06 - id:2197345

The Curse of Being Perfect…And Cocky

My name is Naizen Yuushuu but I was known back in high school as Sweet Perfection. I know, such petty name for me but what can I say, it is true. Ever since I was little, I was able to do anything without the slightest flaw even when I don’t try at all: I always aced tests in high school, I am great at all thesports I do, and I am the greatest looking guy you’ll ever see too boot. I have short blonde hair, emerald colored eyes, a dazzling smile girls would die for, and I have a very slim but greatly built body, the mere perfection of what an eighteen year old guy should look like, let me correct that, of what a god should look like.

I was envied by all for my perfection but also hated for it too, and I do admit they all have a reason to, I mean really, who wouldn’t want to be me? All the guys I used to know wanted me to hang around them and they all wanted to be like me, even the teachers were amazed by my intellect and athletic abilities. I was even worshiped by every girl I met and if I gave them a quick smile, they all melt before me. I received over hundreds of love letters from the girls in my school and from some girls that didn’t go to my school at all. Yes, I was blessed with perfection, but sadly, there was one minor price for me to pay because of it.

My price to pay was that I could never be alone without being swarmed by girls. Sure, it was great having them throw themselves on you, but after a few years of it, it just gets too damn creepy and really, really annoying. I have tried everything to try to be alone once in my life but nothing works, not even hiding in the boy’s bathroom. That is one story I never want to retell again. All of the guys thought I was lucky but I hate it, I always thought they were lucky the ones. And before you even think it, I am not gay I just haven’t found the girl who could live up to the standards I want.

I lived through this curse since high school and I only got break from it when I was at home but now I am starting college and I just know there is going to be certain hell to deal with! That is unless I figure out a way to beat this damn curse! Only if I could figure out the one thing that would drive most of the girl population away from me…damn…what am I thinking? Nothing can do that, I am too irresistible for any girl I come across, only someone with brain loss could ignore me!

Well, at least…that was what had thought until…until I met the strangest group of girls in the whole world at the one place I never thought to ever be in…the one place no guy like me would ever step into...

Sorry that the introduction is so short but I couldn’t think of anything else that would show you how utterly obnoxious Naizen was before I got to the real fun with the story! Please review and if you would like to give me some advice on how to write better than please go ahead…but please…be easy on me!



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