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Sixty Minutes
Sixty
minutes of my everyday
Tired
and side-by-side we go home
We
can do it with a passionate embrace
Or
with an tongue-tied silence
To
inspire another sappy love poem of mine
And
make it a ride that would send me to heaven
Or
to stir my deepest moods of sorrow
Then
send me straight to hell
Bittersweet
sixty minutes of my life
Where
each and every second count
So
lets make it memories as happy as a smile
And
romantic as a kiss
Elude
the void of sadness and tears
Of
endless distain and self-pity
The
sharp edges that might hurt us
The
pain that might break us apart
Stay
here in the my arms who cares
In
the embrace of the one who loves you
Stay
here where the wind blows beautifully on your hair
And
where your scent is carried by the breeze to me
Again
let your elbows rest in my welcoming lap
And
lean your weight on me
And
on your way down don’t forget to take care
Now
the only thing left is your perfume on my hands
Sixty
minutes of our time
We
are tired and exhausted
Yet
forgive me if your wishes differ from mine
For
I wish this sixty minutes of our to never end
A little background information. My girlfriend and me always ride home together from our college and that's what inspired this poem. Anyway, I'd really like to know what did you think about the poem. Your comments, suggestions, questions and other forms of reviews are very much welcomed. R/R