Kid Land

Have you ever been to a place,

With no parent in trace?

Where candy is for dinner, breakfast, or lunch?

Where you play games and toys, by bundle and bunch?

Where the sky is sunny

And everyone is funny?

Well if you haven’t, hop right here

And suddenly you’ll appear

In this place of high demand.

So come join me in Kid Land!

This is my revised version of my sister’s poem. Sunnysmile8885 is 10 years old and looking for suggestions. Check out her original piece and leave some friendly advice.