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My first fully written out song. I might add chord notations to it if I ever finalize those. I find the chorus a bit repetitive, any thoughts about improvements would be helpful!
One early Sunday morning
Watching people pass by around me
They got things to do
Got places to go
And I’m just wandering aimlessly
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Everybody’s changing
Their worlds rearranging
And I’m stuck standing here in neutral
The same thing over and over
I cannot break this cycle
As everyone goes speeding on by
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Falling through the clouds
Crashing to the ground
As the wind howls ferociously
Unveiling the future
While shrouding the past
The truth doesn’t come quietly
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Everybody’s changing
Their worlds rearranging
And I’m stuck standing here in neutral
The same thing over and over
I cannot break this cycle
As everyone goes speeding on by
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Going up in flames
This blaze cannot be tamed
The fires burning all around me
Crackling, sizzling never stopping
This is life it just keeps on rocking
Birth, death, and somewhere in between
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Everybody’s changing
Their worlds rearranging
And I’m stuck standing here in neutral
The same thing over and over
I cannot break this cycle
As everyone goes speeding on by
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Walking down the street
One late Sunday evening
Watching the crowds mingle around me
Am I a part of it
Or is it a part of me
It all just seems to consume me
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Everybody’s changing
Their worlds rearranging
And I’m stuck standing here in neutral
The same thing over and over
I cannot break this cycle
As everyone goes speeding on by
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As evertone goes speeding on by
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As the world goes speeding on by