ok, weird poem, but plz tell me anything i evrythin u want on it. all criticism accepted, even for the slightest correction. i wanna give it to the one for whom it is, but not b4 i revise it with the commets i hope to get from u guys here. so, i'll b waiting. THNX!

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A letter to the one I love

I am that which I deny and fight.

That which I mostly and usually criticize.

Sadly, I abide the cold and cruel law of life,

that in the end you are that which you despise.

The typical and ordinary girl

the one that pointlessly cries without a shoulder.

Solving anything and everything with empty tears,

I usually run away from all my fears.

I try and act like I’m strong.

though you say I’m trying to prove I’m tough.

Now I ponder whether it matters which it is,

for I am neither, as it seems to be.

As I strongly out cry my eyes

under my breath I apologize,

to the point where they become empty words,

something even you call to attention.

It is then that I force myself to stop

even while I wish to go on

because since I can’t stop the tears from coming

I try to find solace through saying “I’m sorry”

I’m sorry for making such mistakes

even though it’s completely humane.

I also apologize for with my tears drowning you,

to the point where you get upset, too.

And even while you tell me to be quiet,

I will not stop apologizing.

For I feel bad enough to make it seem,

that the words have lost all meaning.

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remember, anything and evrything that can b corrected, let me know! thnx! and hope u enjoyed it