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Author: Raleven
Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Reviews: 38 - Published: 07-25-06 - Updated: 12-17-06 - Complete - id:2218739

This is MY Life?

Eric baby! Come here please, we're going to go home” yelled out the woman with her hair blowing in the wind as she looked around the park for her son.

Mommy! Mommy I'm coming!” shouted a 5 year old boy running across the grass as quickly as he could to get to the loving arms of his mother.

I'm over here baby” waved the woman with long beautiful blond hair

Mommy! I made new friends!” shouted the young boy excitedly “Do you want to meet them?!”

Of course baby! I'd love to.” stated the woman simply while smiling

Judy, Aniket, and Sean, I want you to come meet my Mommy” said the little boy as he held his hand out as to invite them to him. “I have the best mommy in the whole world” Eric stated proudly.

Judy shyly took his hand and let out a small smile to the older woman. “Hi, I'm Judy” she said very shyly while darting a glance up then looking down at her shuffling feet and turning a slight shade of pink.

Hello Judy, I'm very happy to meet you, oh and who's this behind you?” the woman smiled softly

H..H.....Hi..I'm Sean” the red headed boy muttered softly while looking at his surroundings, the ground, then back up again his face turning bright red.

Hi Sean, its an honor to meet you, and I take it you're Aniket then?” the woman asked turning the the last boy

Yes, I'm Aniket” he held out his hand in a very grown-up manner “Nice to meet you Ma'am” he said very politely

Hello Aniket, it's very nice to meet you. My my, you seem very grown up for your age”

Thank you Ma'am” Aniket said in a very proud voice “I want to be just like my Daddy when I grow up.” he said with a look of adoration in his eyes.

Look sweetie, it's your father, why don't you go say hi, then we'll all go home okay?” asked Eric's motherushering her little boy towards his father.

DADDY!” shouted Eric jumping up and down in excitement

Just as he was about to turn around and run into his father's arms and look up into his face only to...

BRIINNGGGG his alarm went off as he pathetically tried to hit it into submission. “Shut up shut up shut up!! Stop ringing...” he half heartedly groaned as someone bouncy jumped into his room

"WAKE UP SLEEPY HEAD!" shouted a voice located right next to his ear

“Judy...please tell me what time it is right now” he asked

“Eric honestly, why can't you just look at your alarm clock? Its right next to you, you're so lazy sometimes.” she said exasperatedly as he looked up at her expectantly

“Ugh. Fine, its 7:30 AM now get up you have classes to get to” she said as she stormed off to get ready for her own classes. “MAN! College is really hard, and here I am acting like everyone's mother. Geez, they're all like little kids I wonder if these two ever graduated kindergarten.”

As Judy got ready for her classes she ran to the bathroom door “Kevin get out of the bathroom, seriously, I know you're seeing Stacie today and all, but I went through all the hard trouble of making you and Eric breakfast so get out here and appreciate me and my hard work for you guys and eat it!” she shouted through the door

“I'm coming! I'm coming!” Kevin shouted back as he hurried up to finish getting ready so he could eat breakfast. A large figure ran through the bathroom door to the kitchen on a mission. A mission to get....FOOD! As he ran down the hallway and stumbled clumsily into his chair at the table he quickly said while stuffing food into his mouth “We appreciate you and bow down to your feet mistress Judy” he mumbled while chewing his food.

“Kevin, while I'm glad to hear you say you appreciate me, please chew your food next time before you say it.” said Judy. She then turned down the hall and shouted “ERIC HURRY UP AND COME EAT OR YOU'LL BE LATE” 20 seconds later there was a figure running down the hallway on his way to sit only to be tripped and fall over by Kevin's foot that had a habit of getting in the way of things. “Kevin, that was uncalled for, apologize. Now.” Judy said sternly

“Do I have to?” Kevin whined

“YES!” If you complain one more time I'm going to put something wet and slimy in your bed tonight, if you cross me one more time, it might move too. With that comment Kevin had visibly shuddered.

“Okay okay. I'm sorry Eric” He mumbled under his breath as he helped him up into his chair. “Well look at it this way Judy, he's head over feet for you” Kevin laughed as both of them turned pink and looked in opposite directions then at their feet as Judy shuffled to get his breakfast for him.

“Here” she whispered to him as she turned even brighter pink and went off to take a shower now that Kevin had finally gotten out of the bathroom.

As she untied her hair and turned the water on to let it warm up, her thoughts wondered to a friend of hers.

(bold thoughts)

I wonder how Aniket is doing, I haven't seen him in awhile. I worry about him, I hope he's doing alright. Now that i think about it, I worry more about poor Stacie who has to live with both him and Sean. It amazes me that she can do that and even survive, I have enough trouble with Eric and Kevin...

Suddenly what was hot relaxing water, was freezing, shocking Judy out of her thoughts.

“KEVINNN!!!” she shrieked “I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!! YOU WILL DIE A SLOW PAINFUL DEATH!”

“...uh-oh...perhaps...I should've warned her that I used up all the hot water...” he mumbled as he ran out of the small apartment in attempt to hide from Judy, but more importantly, just to see Stacie.

Judy angrily stomped out of the shower bent on the murder of someone named Kevin. He DARED to use up all of her hot water?! Oh boy he was going to pay. Eric barely managed to keep up with her as she ran off in the direction of their myth class. As she stormed into the classroom she sent Kevin a death glare that said “There's no escaping it, you're going to suffer”. He shuddered and looked towards Stacie, losing himself in her eyes. Aniket then strolled into the class late...again. He then sat directly next to Stacie, which angered Kevin to no end.

If only I was brave enough to tell her how I feel Kevin thought to himself

Aniket then looked over at Stacie and caught her eye and he shot her his winning “player” smile.

Eww. What does he want?” thought Stacie “I know that I live with him and everything, but, that's just for rent reasons.”

Sean was sitting in the back of the classroom and seemed to be paying arrention to what the teacher was saying, unlike the rest of the class. He sat there villigantly and took his notes for what he guessed was going to be on the final exam. Oleg was seen staring out the window, not just for the sake of being lost in the beautiful summer sky, but more at the skankily clad college girls. Suddenly, a young woman with short chestnut brown hair run through the door her hair flying wildly around her. She apologized profously for being late to class, she was new and didn't know her way around. The teacher nodded and asked her to introduce herself and choose a seat.

“Hi, my name is Neta, I'm a transfer student here at San Diego college from Santa Cruz college.” she said.

As she spoke, Oleg's attention turned to her. “...She's beautiful..” he thought to himself.

Her eyes were probably the most captivating part of her appearance. They were a storm grey that looked like the could be the very winds what battled ships out on the harbor. The closest seat near by was the one right next to Oleg, so he silently cheered for his luck when she took her seat next to him. He immedetly dropped thoughts of Stacie and concentrated on how to get Neta to go with him on a date. So he decided to do something he hadn't done in years. He was going to pass notes in class, so he immedetly started scrawling something on a small slip of ripped binder paper.

“Hi, my name is Oleg, since you're new, are you busy this weekend? I can show you your way around so you wont be late to anymore of your classes.” he quickly wrote down and passed to her.

Hey there, as you probably already know, I'm Neta. It's a pleasure to meet you Oleg. I'm sorry, but actually I am busy tomorrow, my friend Tyler is helping me move into my new apartment that I'm sharing with him and my friend Sara. I'm sure it'll be quite an interesting year, hope we can get to be friends?” she wrote on a different piece of paper and quickly threw back to him when the teacher's back was turned.

Oleg turned his attention back to the class quite disappointed, but determined to have her for himself even more. He jotted down a few notes that the teacher had written up on the board just when class ended. Everyone immedetly packed up and made a mad dash for the exit. By now it was lunch time and Neta was on her way to go meet up with Tyler and her new roommates. As she was walking out the door Stacie caught up with her and introduced herself and described the others and gave her their names so she wouldn't be so confused. Neta smiled apologetically and ran to catch the bus to go downtown for lunch with her roommates.


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