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Author: Mariaa
Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Reviews: 8 - Published: 08-15-06 - Updated: 07-25-08 - Complete - id:2230599

Dedications: This is my first one so really I gotta thank my friends. So Steph and Kate, it was worth having you ramble on about fanfiction so I could find fiction press.

As I say this is my first so please don’t be too harsh with me, but Id rather be told my stuff is crap by a total stranger than someone I know. Please read and review.

Chapter One – Lost Love

FLASH BACK

“Lock the door darling, gotta keep you safe”

“Yeah mom I know,” she said.

“Yeah I’m not in the mood to lose you!” her father joked.

“I’ll leave the keys in so you can have the radio on, ok?” her mom stopped the car leaving the local radio station blaring loudly. As her mom picked up her bag and her and Marissa’s father got out of the car Marissa turned the stereo up louder.

So I cash my cheques and place my bets, I hope I’ll always win.

Even if I don’t on stuffed because I live a life of sin. But it’s alright….’

Her phone rang

“Hey Babe, you alright?” she said into the receiver pushing the phone tightly against her ear as she fiddled with the volume of the radio to enable her to hear the person on the other end.

“Hey girl” a male voice replied.

“So what are you up to?” she asked the male whilst smiling broadly.

“Nothing really just wondered were you at, and if you wanna come out with us when you get back still?”

She smiled thinking about what her and her friends usually get up to. They were never short of laughs.

“My mom and dad are jus dropping some stuff off. So I’m gonna be about twenty minutes or so.” She told him.

“Sure what ever, call me when you get we’ll meet you in ya yard, still. Yeah?” he suggested.

“Ai, sure. In a bit.” She put the phone down and restored the radio to its previous volume.

I’m not here for your entertainment; you don’t really wanna mess with me tonight.’

Bang. Bang. There were two large loud bangs. Gunshots.

END FLASH BACK



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