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Chapter 13
Page 1
chapter title page
Panel 1
Autumn trees on campus
Panel 2
Satchiko sitting in a classroom.
Page 2
Panel 1
A man at the classroom door. We see
from his shoulders to just above his knees.
WRITING PROFESSOR
Miss Hasegawa, a word?
VOICE (SATCHIKO)
Yes, sir.
Panel 2
The professor sitting behind his desk
in his office. He looks concerned.
WRITING PROFESSOR
Miss Hasagawa, your writing has taken a
rather disturbing turn. Is everything all right?
Panel 3
Satchiko looks surprised.
SATCHIKO
(aside) No, everything is not all
right, but i don’t know why. I hate not knowing.
Yes, sir.
Panel 4
The professor is thumbing a book.
WRITING PROFESSOR
I wanted to encourage you to gather
pieces you felt were strong and help you prepare them for
publication.
Page 3
Panel 1
Satchiko’s face, still confused,
lights up.
WRITING PROFESSOR
In light of your current assignments,
though...
Panel 2
Satchiko’s face falls.
WRITING PROFESSOR
Maybe you aren’t ready for that just
yet.
Panel 3
Satchiko leaning against the closed
office door.
SATCHIKO
(aside) I have already started to
submit pieces on my own.
(aside) So far, it’s been nothing but rejections.
Panel 4
Satchiko sets her bookbag beside her
desk.
Page 4
Panel 1
A book is in the middle of Satchiko’s
desk.
SATCHIKO
(aside) Some people use charts to track
their submissions. I use a scrapbook.
Panel 2
The book is now open, showing a story
on the left-hand page, and a letter on the right.
SATCHIKO
(aside) It’s nothing too fancy. I
just put the piece in a sleeve, and then line up the rejections in
sleeves behind them.
Panel 3
Satchiko is sliding a letter with
handwriting on the margins into a sleeve.
SATCHIKO
(aside) Kaori thinks I’m crazy, but I
think it’s a great way to see where I’ve been as a writer, and to
see how far I’ve come.
Panel 4
Satchiko places the sleeve in the
notebook.
Page 5
Panel 1
Satchiko is sitting on her bed reading
through her scrapbook.
Panel 2
Satchiko smiles softly.
Panel 3
Satchiko looks angry.
Panel 4
Satchiko laughs.
Panel 5
Satchiko looks thoughtful.
SATCHIKO
(aside) I think I’m getting closer!
Page 6
Panel 1
Kazuki is leaning against a balcony
railing.
VOICE (HIKARU)
Man, don’t you ever get tired of
brooding?
KAZUKI
No.
Panel 2
Hikaru joins Kazuki at the railing.
HIKARU
What do you see when you look out her,
anyway?
Panel 3
Close-up of Kazuki in profile.
KAZUKI
Freedom. The ability to live a quiet
life.
You know, I really wonder if maybe I wouldn’t be happier-
Panel 4
Hands grab the back of Kazuki’s
collar.
VOICE (TOSHIYUKI)
Finsh that thought, and I’ll throw
you off this balcony.
Page 7
Panel 1
Toshiyuki has moved beside Hikaru.
Kazuki is in the background rubbing his neck. He looks annoyed.
TOSHIYUKI
I told you, everything will be back to
normal soon enough.
Panel 2
The guys are in a row looking out over
the balcony.
KAZUKI
Will it be enough, though? Being in the
spotlight is pretty rough.
TOSHIYUKI
And you were made fo the spotlight,
Kazuki.
Panel 3
Kazuki throws something at Toshiyuki.
Hikaru is oblivious.
HIKARU
He’s right, man. With those looks and
that smile...you really missed your calling!
KAZUKI
How do you figure?
(aside) And why have you noticed my body, Hikaru?
Panel 4
Toshiyuki has moved away from the
railing, leaving only Kazuki and Hikaru.
HIKARU
Can you imagine how sought after you’d
be if you were a screen actor?
KAZUKI
But I love being a seiyuu.
Page 8
Panel 1
Hikaru looks at Kazuki, surprised.
VOICE (TOSHIYUKI)
Good! Then shut up and enjoy your life.
Panel 2
Kazuki looks sheepish.
VOICE (TOSHIYUKI)
You have a job you love.
You have a great girl...provided you don’t screw it up.
Panel 3
Kazuki looks hopeless.
KAZUKI
I know she’s great. I just feel
guilty.
Page 9
Panel 1
Toshiyuki has rejoined Hikaru at the
railing.
TOSHIYUKI
Look at it this way- she’s an
aspiring writer. Once she gets her break, you two can dodge fans
together!
Panel 2
Kazuki glares at Toshiyuki. Hikaru is
in the background laughing.
Panel 3
Toshiyuki crosses his arms,
unaffected.
TOSHIYUKI
Now, what should we do today?
Panel 4
Kazuki and Hikaru just shrug.
Page 10
Panel 1
The guys have decided to lose
themselves in a bookstore. Hikaru is sitting reading. Kazuki is
scanning the shelves.
Panel 2
Toshiyuki has found his way to the
bookstore’s cafe.
TOSHIYUKI
(aside) I’m really not a bookworm.
Panel 3
The guys then wander into an arcade.
Panel 4
Toshiyuki and Kazuki are facing off in
a racing game.
TOSHIYUKI
Tana would so school Hidori at this
game!
KAZUKI
In your dreams, Toshi!
Panel 5
Hikaru is playing a shooter game.
Somewhat hidden behind the game is a girl.
Page 11
Panel 1
Hikaru is very focused on the game. He
hasn’t noticed the girl step around the machine.
GIRL
Excuse me, are you Hikaru Junoushi?
Panel 2
Hikaru looks surprised.
HIKARU
Yeah, I am.
Panel 3
In the distance, seen over Hikaru’s
shoulder, Kazuki and Toshiyuki are still racing each other. They’re
laughing.
Panel 4
Kazuki is about to beat Toshiyuki.
VOICE (HIKARU)
I think we should get going.
KAZUKI AND TOSHIYUKI
Huh?
Page 12
Panel 1
Hikaru is smiling good-naturedly, but
his eyes are filled with worry.
HIKARU
Let’s go grab lunch. I’m starving!
Panel 2
Kazuki and Toshiyuki look confused,
but follow Hikaru.
Panel 3
The girl Hikaru met is follwing them.
She has a couple of friends with her.
Panel 4
The guys make it outside.
HIKARU
(aside) There’s gotta be someplace we
can duck into.
Page 13
Panel 1
Hikaru’s eyes widen as he smiles.
HIKARU
(aside) There! Perfect!
Panel 2
Hikaru has started walking. Kazuki and
Toshiyuki are just standing there. The girls have just emerged from
the arcade.
GIRL
Junoushi-san, can we hang out with you?
Panel 3
Hikaru flinches. Kazuki looks away.
Toshiyuki turns to face the girls.
GIRL
Oh my gosh, you’re Toshiyuki Sato!
ANOTHER GIRL
Is that Kazuki Kobayashi? He’s so
much cuter in person!
Panel 4
Kazuki blushes. Hikaru is now beside
Toshiyuki.
TOSHIYUKI
Yes, yes, I am Toshiyuki Sato. We’d
love to invite you to join us, but I’m afraid we’re headed
somewhere you shouldn’t go.
Panel 5
The girls have turned back sadly
toward the arcade.
Page 14
Panel 1
Hikaru and Toshiyuki face each other.
HIKARU
Nice one, Toshi.
TOSHIYUKI
I have a pocket full of them.
Panel 2
Hikaru and Toshiyuki turn their back
on the arcade.
TOSHIYUKI
Does that make me think, though... We
should go find a pool hall to lose a few hours in.
What do you think Kazuki?
Panel 3
The spot Kazuki was standing in is
empty.
VOICE (HIKARU)
Kazuki?
VOICE (TOSHIYUKI)
Damn it, Kazuki!
Panel 4
Hikaru looks at Toshiyuki with
concern.
HIKARU
Where do you think he’s gone?
TOSHIYUKI
I don’t know.
Page 15
Panel 1
Toshiyuki is on his cell phone.
TOSHIYUKI
I doubt he will, but if Kazuki calls
Satchiko, call me back.
No, it’s nothing. Don’t worry about it.
Yes, everything is fine.
Panel 2
Hikaru pointing toward the left
distance.
HIKARU
I’ll go this way.
TOSHIYUKI
I’ll go the other way, then.
Panel 3
Hikaru walking down the sidewalk.
HIKARU
Kazuki? Come on, man! This isn’t
funny!
Panel 4
Toshiyuki has stopped a fellow
pedestrian.
TOSHIYUKI
I’m sorry to bother you, but have you
seen a guy come through here. He’d be a bit taller than
me...teenager...
Panel 5
A split-panel- both Hikaru and
Toshiyuki walking down the sidewalk.
BOTH
Kazuki, where are you?
Page 16
Panel 1
Toshiyuki looks frustrated.
TOSHIYUKI
(aside) I know Kazuki is feeling
vulnerable these days.
(aside) I just didn’t think he’d run away.