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Author: Vivica-survives
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Published: 08-19-06 - Updated: 08-19-06 - id:2232903

Angry night tonight and this is what was spawned. I’m not really happy with this one, but I’m probably will do another, maybe longer poem around the words “astounding failure”.

I almost fell backwards

I righted myself

Then I fell forwards

Face down

Inside out it doesn’t matter

I’m still in the ground

I watched them weep for a child they didn’t own

I watched them wail for a person they didn’t know

I turned my back on them with a smile

Now I wish I could go back and say

Please stop with the pretenses

I am not your perfect child

I am not you spineless doll

I am the one you tried to hide away

I am your most astounding failure

I am the one that haunted your halls

You tried to get rid of me

Why are you crying now that I am gone?

Burn in hell, you hypocrites

Fuck you and them until kingdom come

And there it is. Let me know if it sucks cunt, which I'm pretty sure it does. Meh.

-Vivica



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