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Author: reallyinnocent2007
Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Reviews: 8 - Published: 08-28-06 - Updated: 08-28-06 - Complete - id:2238333

Suicide

By: reallyinnocent

I laughed,

I smiled,

But it wasn’t real.

I’m looking at it,

Waiting for the day,

My day,

Till I Die

Death is near me,

I can feel it,

Taste it.

The knife comes closer,

The blood slowly falls down my hands.

I feel a new awakening

Death is standing Next to me

Waiting for my last breath.

And so I lay and wait,

Till my time.

No more pain.

Death has taken over me,

Leaving me nothing,

But my lifeless body.

People see my body,

Tears fall down their eyes,

And for that day People mourn,

But only for a Day.

No one loves me,

No one cares,

And so… I DIED!

A.N. leave a commit tell me what u think? i need critism. so please leave me a commit. i mean review.



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