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note: This is my first sonnet, so don't be too harsh (I wrote this a few months ago).
I had a hard time working with the iambic pentameter and having everything make some sort of sense (which it doesn't).
A Claim
June 8, 2006
A bright white landscape filled with flying snow;
It’s blinding, blowing, blue with freezing cold.
Yet penguins will march on, the seals will know
That someday soon will rise a Sun of gold.
But until then, the Moon will cast her flame.
So watch the winking Stars and as they spread,
Old Time will spread his wings out with a claim;
That moss will be a cushion for your head;
The Clouds your blanket, cloak, to keep you warm;
A gull, a friend for in your lying wake.
So help will come within each raging storm,
When numb, your body, iced, and full of ache.
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Indifference cannot make a life fulfilled,
A different view, harsh times, and guidance will.