I came up with the idea for this story at the rascal flatts concert.i'm not really sure what to say about it. it's a little odd...

Rose Love

Rose petals falling softly
Peace is in your eyes
The love we always felt
Comes at our demise
I’d rather die than live without you
But society tears us apart
Our love so pure, love so deep
How can this be wrong?
All those nasty names
Hurt within our soul
You’re a blooming rose
In the sea of thorns
Without you, I’d be a rose well wilted
Nothing to do but morn
Evil people with lids still on
Will never want you to know
How much I love it
When you hold me, when you love me
How much I love you still
Always and forever
In death forever, I will
Our love, the undying rose…

what'd you think? odd, strange? cool? please review!