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Flying
The thermals below my feathers
Carry me forever
Above the hassles far below
The clouds are my playground
And there is only one sound
The wings of my thermal partner, the water fowl
The patch work of cities below me
The wind blows and sets my heart free
And the limitless sky lies beyond
I drift lazilly with my wings out stretched
All my feathers perfectly meshed
And the smell of fire far away
The storm from not long ago
Had struck a tree a mighty blow
And sent my home up in flames
I have not eaten for not eaten for three days
Since I lost my mate who had begun to lay
I looked to my neighbor; the water fowl
He had lost his mate to the flames as well
I had watched her as she fell
Into the trees far below
The water fowl circled the place where she fell
Hoping beyond hope she was well
Leaving me to wonder when next I'd eat
The fowl circled for half the day then gave up
He flew a mile away in a huff
And ran head long into a tree
I heard the snap from my thermal perch
There would be no need to search
My thermal neighbor was throughly dead
I was going to eat because of him
I followed in the direction he had been
I would not starve tonight
I disliked myself for eating the fowl
I scavenged him from an earthen bowl
I never stopped for an instant
I did what I did to survive
Just the way my ancestors had thrived
Among the clouds; forever in the skies
A.N.. i wrote this as an observation in my nature journal and then it evolved into a poem... i thinks its rather good... enjoy... and yes i know that ducks dont use thermals because there power flappers... but when i wrote the log my angle made it look like the duck was on the same thermal as the eagle... i think i did a good job of keeping the eagles ferrality and yet personifying it as well... as i said this as based off actual observations... though the loss of mates was a smudge on my part as was the birds suicide... i knew they both were paired and i didnt see there mates with them so i made an assumption... same with the gooses death... upon finding his remains i did a field disection... its neck was broke but weather before or after death was impossible... still i think its good so please read and review...