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My Dreams Are Better
I love you dearly,
More than I can
express.
We hold each other
fondly,
Our love together is
strong.
But my dreams are
better,
Than waking up with
you.
In my dreams I’m with
the man
Whom I truly love.
The events that tore us
apart,
Are forgotten and I’m
happy.
When I’m awake,
I see you and think:
My dreams are better,
Than waking up with
you.
He was the one and
only,
I thought we’d grow
old together.
Though now he’s gone,
I still go on.
All I’m left with you
And his visits to my
dreams.
I can’t wake up with
him,
So I wake up with you.
(Uh, no idea where this came from. Most of my poems evolve from a sentence popping into my head. In this case it was: “My dreams are better, Than waking up with you.” I thought to myself: “Ouch, that is so cold…” And then just started writing it on the bus-ride to school. I didn’t actually have real people in my head (or did I?), I just thought it made an interesting story/poem. This poem doesn’t rhyme! Or it shouldn’t! Except for that second last coupling. That was an accident and I would change it if I didn’t like it so much. Anyway, I’m not much of a poet, so your feedback and muchly appreciated)