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To everyone who liked this story, thank you and I'm sorry, and if you didn't review, please skip ahead to the full summary, but for the four of you who did review, here are some individualized responses. : )
Gwyn Baranof: I know! It was completely useless! And unsurprisingly, chapters 10 and 11 were originally one chapter. I’m really glad you liked the oddity of my chapters and I really, really do appreciate you reviewing every chapter of my story. It meant a lot to me.
The Case Reviewer: The relationship…eh. Yes, depth is seriously lacking and to be honest, I think Donovan’s getting to be a bit more shallow and clueless than I intended him to be. Kissing her every time he sees her; shame on him. While I like all of my characters, I look back and read through them and think of how incredibly unrealistic they are and it just doesn’t please me as much as it used to. Ulitmately, all will be revealed, and maybe it’ll kick some ass in the end, but for now it needs revision. Thank you for reviewing me, and if you still remember this story in a few months, maybe you’ll do it again: )
Raye Dragonmage: Wow. I didn’t think I’d ever be happy to receive a death threat: yours was brilliant. For the sake of my life, although I am taking a hiatus from this story for awhile, I’ll leave what is already written up on the site, go ahead and revise it later on, and then when I have the rest of the chapters written out and revised I’ll start posting them rather than just posting as I type.
foreverlonely6: Aw, you really liked it! I know what you mean about being picky; if I don’t like the first couple chapters of a story, I won’t read the rest of it. I went back and read the first couple chapters of mine, and I did not want to read the rest of it. Eventually though, I’ll finish this.
I'm not giving up on this story, but I am taking a hiatus from it for a good bit of time, and I will be starting a more mature and definitely more realistic story seeing as it will be based on actual events, circumstances, etc. Well with the exception of this one unsually attractive guy in my head, but other than that, it will be completely realistic, and if you think I'm lying about anything other than the aforementioned guy in the story (and the situations I put him in), it will just go to show that truth is stranger than fiction. If you're interested, it will be called The Diary of Jane and it will be appearing within the next week. Thank you again for your time reading and reviewing this!