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I love you
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The door to your heart is locked
Unreachable, and without tears.
Even though you won't hear it,
these three words I quietly declare.
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The past became buried,
and you've grown distant.
Maybe you won't believe it,
but I whisper again with conviction.
These three words were meant for you.
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Even when your ignorance becomes painful,
Complicated emotions didn't change.
Three words like lies,
Left on your doorstep unnoticed.
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In the end, it will never reach you,
and I remember the reasons why.
Three words from me to you,
Lost in the silence of time.
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“I love you...”
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October 12, 2006
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A/N: wow, it's been a while, haven't written anything for the longest time, felt compelled to write this today, plz pardon any mistakes >. i would like advice on the last line, whether or not the poem is better with the 'i love you' or not. thanks, much appreciated