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High Gear
Author:
Seras Nova PM
Only for you babe. would I pay this much for the gas. Hmnn, do I have an obession with the gas prices? Maybe! :D Anyway, read and review? Oh...and always enjoy! :
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Poetry - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-26-06 - Status: Complete - id: 2266876
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High Gear

You'd never thought I would do it-
but I did.
Laugh now and see where my singleness, the oneness
has gotten me.

Do I sense pity in your eyes?
Fuck that.

I'm going into overdrive-
kickingkickingkicking it

into HIGH gear
for you babe.

Only for you
would I pay this much
for the gas.


First off, I just wanted to say I am sorry for not reviewing others as much I feel I should be. I am just very busy in my first semester of college. .

As for the poem, I am not really happy with it . I like the strength and passion I put in it, as well as the anger. However, I don't feel as if it has any direction to it.

So basicly...not one of my best.

Anyway, keep writing guys!

-Seras

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