
| Overwhelming
Author: MyInspiration a poem that depicts pressure, overwhelmedness, and just what I got down when I sat and write my feelings onto paper or in this case, computer
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Angst - Words: 180 - Published: 11-16-06 - Status: Complete - id: 2277593
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Overwhelming
Darkness caves in
Pressure builds
I'm drowning in a hopeless, black sea
This moment should last forever
So I have a chance to accomplish all that I need
Your life flickers before your eyes
But all I see are what haunted me in life
Fixing a broken group of friends
And perfecting my soul inside
Doing more than needs to be done
And most of all, having fun
That it all crumbled
Beneath me
So I get better and it doesn't happen again
So I don't drown once again in that discouraging sea
Please review. It's so depressing to see like 15 hits and one review :)
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