another really short poem. a girl at karate told me to make up a poem on the spot so i looked at this boy, who was my friend until he found out that i liked him, and made this poem.

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Unseen

I see you standing there

Golden light streaming in your hair

Your eyes are turned away from me

Cause I’m the one you’ll never see

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what do you think? is there any good emotion in it or is it just dull?