Hello, my lovely reviewers. This is my favorite song out of all that I've written, so I decided to see what other people thought. I put the hyphens in to help you understand the flow of the words to the music (I hope it helps!!). Please tell me what you think! Thanks :-)

Look fast--hold tight,
This dream is yours tonight.
Speak words--of truth,
Because I know he loves you.

Hold on--too fast,
We wanna make this last.
Reach high--jump blind,
Those secrets don't need to hide.

Thi-is is a new thing, girl
Le-ets all sing and dance now.
Thi-is the new concept,
Fo-or a, lovely, lovely girl.
Thi-is Sara’s serenade…

I went--into
the soul of you
You need--to stop
Staring at the ground

Don't stop--pass go
you found your a prize to hold.
Keep on--running,
this is Sara’s song to sing.

Thi-is is a new thing, girl,
Le-ets all sing and dance now.
Thi-is the new concept,
Fo-or a, lovely, lovely girl.
Thi-is Sara’s serenade…

Speak loud--my friend,
on this your life depends.
Don’t strut--don't shake,
or this'll be your life's mistake.

She’s there--sittin
all caught up now.
In--his love,
this is all right now.

Thi-is is what she's waited for,
Le-ets all sing and dance now.
Thi-is the new miracle,
Sara’s finally sung her lifesong…

Thi-is Sara’s serenade