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Author: polka dots and addictions
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-30-06 - Updated: 11-30-06 - Complete - id:2282700

The first line of the second stanza is half stolen (ive tweaked it slightly) from beyond sarcasm’s poem ‘neverland dreamscapes’. It’s an amazing piece, go & check it out


Her hand is shaking as she lights the match
& it’s not only the wick that is alight-
your eyes are on fire, burning like the candle flame,
burning the image of you into her soul
where it’s smouldering & bleeding blackened memories

(this is heartbreak, sunshine, what an adventure!
I feel I could almost drown
(oh so intoxicatingly) in it…)

& you broke her so carefully that it could be called
perfection



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