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Rain
Gentle breeze that blows unseen
Through this reality of dreams
Calming all these soothing thoughts
Breaking all these broken hearts
Bitter smile pierce my heart
Love awhile then depart
Give to you all that I’ve got
You take away that which I sought.
These lovely bones that slowly melt
Like liquid fire burning velvet
Screaming of sweet red desire
Fire burning, jumping fire
Break…away
Break…of dawn
Break…the new day
On this washed out…horizon
This icy cold that burns my heart
Leaving tracks like a broken cart
Splinters coating all my life
Like a broken cross; purest strife
Ecstatic nightmare, fragment dream
Untainted bliss in blood and oil
Cut my heartstrings, rip them out
And let me eat it…my immortal.
A/N: I guess you could say I loosely based this off of Immortal Rain (for any manga fans out there ) but I really just kinda sat down and the words sorts…floated right out. I love it when that happens. Also, to those whose stories I am editing, I will get them all to you A.S.A.P., I promise. (That is, if you still want them. Please let me know either way, okay?) I just didn’t realize how stinking hard the school year was going to be, and now I’ve gone into stress-overdrive (or w/e). Thank you guys so much for being so patient. I love you all!! Btw, I do realize that the middle stanza has absolutley nothing to do w/anything, but I don't have the heart to cut it out. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.