I will not be continuing this version of the story. I'm really sorry to all those of you who have read it up to this point, but I was not happy with it, and there are things I wanted to add and change... so I've begun anew. I've already posted the first chapter of the new version, and I am well on my way to finishing the second chapter. Hopefully you will read it and enjoy it. I'll be sure to have a note in the beginning of the chapters if nothing has changed, to spare you the tediousness of re-reading them. Otherwise, the chapters are entirely new, or have been changed significantly enough that they require reading.

Thanks to all of you who have been faithfully reading and reviewing! I hope you read and enjoy the new, revised version. And I hope it exceeds your expectations.

With love,

Maranwe Telrunya