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The Final Draft
It stings at my mind
Dazed, I snap and
recoil
This story needs
refined
I do not wish to be the
foil.
The plot clearly needs
repenned,
Adding hope of reason
or rhyme.
I’ve desperately
tried to mend,
Clocked in double –
triple! - time.
My disaster’s began
to unfold
In the manner predicted
from the start.
It’s all cliché
I’m told,
But I don’t hear, I
fall apart.