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Author: Wayne Hiebert
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-07-06 - Updated: 12-19-07 - id:2286489

Well here is little bit on another one i wrote but since it is a one-shot..have fun with it.

R&R, thanks have a great X-MAS!


The Hatred of an Ex-Lover

He stands in the rain staring after the man that took everything away from him. He never had a chance to stop that man. The man never looked back other then to chuckle at his very existance. 'Why does this always have to happen to me?' He thinks as the car drives away with the man and his ex-girlfriend. 'Everything I had, gone without my knowing until now. I will get my revenge on him, and her for destroying my trust'Lightning crashes towards him, in a flash he is gone with the lightning and the storm clouds continue to crash towards the car that was driven by the man. Staring out the window the woman speaks up,"You know he will come after us. He knows us better then you think, so what are we going to do" "Nothing, he can't hurt us as long as we don't give away our position. So we must just keep driving and find a secluded spot"
"I have known him most of my life and well, it would seem that we aren't going to get out of this alive, as long as he is alive he will hunt us both down and kill us. He might even let us live but he will torture us..." the woman shivers at the thought of it. Thinking back to when she was attacked by a bunch of thugs and how he stop them without even using any physical force. He only used words, saying them in such a way that the men became so afraid of him that they ran out into the street and were killed by a bus coming through.
"We should stop for the night. It is late, and he wont hurt us around public." the man says as he pulls the car into the hotel parking lot.
The woman whispers to herself, "He never rests, even if it was a small idea"
"What was that darling"
Swirling around, the woman stares into abyss, no one is there.
'That voice... he cant be that fast'
"Oh but I am, you took everything away from me, and yet you left me my life, why?" he chuckles behind her.
"Hey are you ok? You look like you seen a ghost?" the man speaks to the woman as he waves a hand in front of her face.
"He...i...is...h...here..." the woman mumbles out, hearing this the man pulls his gun out of his holster. "He can't be, unless he isn't human"
"He has never been human...I wish I knew what he was..." the woman states as she follows the man up to the hotel room.
"Why, room number thirteen? I am scared"
'Don't be darling, ah ha ha ha!' His voice rings softly through the hallways, sending shivers up both their spines.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM US!!?" the woman screams out.
'I want everything you took, as well as more' His voice laughs mimicly as he appears in front of her and the man. Shooting at him, the man misses as if he wasn't there. Laughing he grabs the man and throws him out the window, and then pulling the woman through the door way and throwing her onto the bed.
"Why do you still pursuit me when you know it is over between us!?" the woman screams at the seemly ghost of him.
"I do not pursuit you...I am just making sure that a promise is kept!" the ghost of him screams as he back hands her, knocking her face down on the bed. Shooting up she watches as he vanishs into dust. Seconds later, the real one walks into the room.
"What the fuck are you doing here?" he asks.
"What do you mean? Your the arragont ass that brought me"
He laughs as he sets down a couple bags of food on the table, and flicks on a couple of lights. Looking at herself, she notices that she is in his bed, in her pjs and still at his house.
Blushing the woman explains about the dream she had or she thought she had.

"Well i would have to say that was very interesting story"

"i am sorry...I love you and I would never do that"

"I know babe, just try to keep that good outlook on life, ok?"

"I know and I love how you can be that way..."

FIN! (it is stupid i know...but hey it is just snip-bit of a bigger one i am working on...)


well there ya go R&R it is just a simple one...



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