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Author: Alcoholic Heart
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Published: 12-08-06 - Updated: 12-08-06 - Complete - id:2287009

Falling


Yesterday was like a nightmare,

I wanted to scream so bad,

to release my pain,

scream out loud


You left me

Why did you?


I saw you with a girl,

She looked like a goddess

I saw her in my place,

Holding the hand I used to hold

Ever so frequently


I never felt more painful

In my whole entire life


I walked away,

My legs giving way,

I stumbled and staggered,

I trembled with pain,

Misery & anger


I felt like killing you,

Just like how you killed me slowly


I felt so tired,

I was trembling so badly,

I tripped,


Falling into the bottomless pit

Of hatred, anger and pain


Falling…


A/N: I'm using the same style I did for my last poem, though I thought the last one as better than this one. But yea, please please review. I need to know what people think about my poetry.



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