
A little poem to start getting the juices flowing again. I am reviewing lots of little snippets of my work from recent months. Would love to hear from all of you. Hope you enjoy it, short but sweet with a dash of melancholy.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Words: 146 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12-11-06 - Status: Complete - id: 2288508
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Thoughts and feelings
They swirl around me like butterflies
Kissing my mind
And the ripples expand ever outward
Deeper still they resonate
They resonate
In the caverns of my soul
I taste your words
And on my tongue flowers bloom or die
Depending on what I tasted
Eyes open now
The world shimmering and quaking
It is so like the night sky
For there are so many lights in it
So many glistening eyes like my own
But the darkness between them seems infinite
And the night seems to consume them
And now come the clouds and the cold silences
My breath seems to be escaping from me
Trying to run out into the world
But dissipating as soon as it leaves
My lips
As they
Slowly
Pale
Is seems as though my breath is ever fading
From this world
1:01 am
12/11/2006
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