This song came to my mind, while I was reading a story a friend of mine wrote about an abusive relationship. Please tell me what you think.

(AN. the musik I wrote it on is partely from the song "Sommer of 69" by Brian Adams)

In my heart I came to see you standing on your front porch

That girl who you’ll never be again

Oh, how I thought I loved you then

Small, fragile in my hands just like broken glass

That girl who cried for a guy like me

That girl who screamed in silence

That girl, that girl, you’ll never be again

Tears streaming down your face

Crumble in the dirt

Begged me to be that man, be that man again

And now you’re gone forever, forever, forever

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Bridge

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Down on your knees, crying your pain in the rain

We were one, but I cut you down

And she said, and she said

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Refrain:

That girl who dances on the moon

And walks a silver line

Holding her hands in time

And I just wish I could go back

Oh yeah

Be that girl again

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And now I see you’re not that girl

That girl you could never be

She’s gone forever, forever, forever

How you told me to just hang on but

Oh, how you got me so wrong and I cut you down

All I ever wanted was that girl you could never be

And now she’s gone forever, forever, forever

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Bridge

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Refrain:

That girl who dances on the moon

And walks a silver line

Holding her hands in time

And I just wish I could go back

Oh yeah

Be that girl again

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Oh how much I loved you then

So much it broke you down with me

And now you’re gone

And I scream in silence

For your loss

Was never meant to be

You’re gone forever, forever, forever

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