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Author: Jack Milo
Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-14-06 - Updated: 12-14-06 - Complete - id:2290169

The whip cracks

He barely flinches

The whip cracks

The flinch is more obvious

The whip cracks

Blood trickles down

The whip cracks

There is a rapid gasping

The whip cracks

A muffled scream

The whip cracks

He screams in pain

The whip cracks

The blood is pouring down

The whip cracks

The dungeon echo’s with his scream

The whip cracks

The tears are pouring out

The bloody whip cracks

His body hangs lifelessly in the chains.



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