
when you feel music in your body, you know that it's good...
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 259 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12-14-06 - id: 2290325
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written
as kind of a short story? but then formatted like a poem... suffering
more than a bit of identity crisis right now...
While his guitar weeps, but not gently. Violently.
The song starts
With the rumble of bass notes
In the tip of my tail bone,
Right above my ass.
Strange,
But it thrums in time
With the bass line.
Every note vibrates up my spine,
Which
Is where the guitar riffs
Tremble,
Running up the vertebrae
T12 to T1,
Every knob a fret on
The Fender Telecaster
He's playing.
The lyrics,
More for sound than for meaning,
Just another
Part of the music,
Tingle along the back
Of my skull into my jaw,
I can't sing, but sometimes
I don't have to.
Words that mean nothing
With a meaning that says
Everything.
Percussion was
Always my favorite,
The snap of the snare
In my eyelids
Mimicking the pulse
Of my heart.
The clash
Of the cymbals
Jumps
Just behind my belly button,
And the bass drum
Is in my thumbs
Vibrating the beat
Through my body
Strange and beautiful.
Jumping with a rhythm
That mingles and swirls
With the others being created.
His songs are all
Assembled
From conversations he's had,
The rise and fall,
Crescendo and decrescendo
Of tone.
Murmurs and shouts,
He even includes
The pauses
Of
Breathing,
The sighs
And eyebrow raising.
You can almost
Feel
The guitar think
Beneath his skilled fingers
As his hands love his guitar
Dreaming and building and…
He claims he's not a magician.
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